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diff --git a/content/2022/comment-on-a-scene-from-planecrash-crisis-of-faith.md b/content/2022/comment-on-a-scene-from-planecrash-crisis-of-faith.md
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 Title: Comment on a Scene from <em>Planecrash</em>: "Crisis of Faith"
 Date: 2022-06-12 20:00
 Category: commentary
-Tags: Eliezer Yudkowsky, worldbuilding
+Tags: Eliezer Yudkowsky, literary critcism, worldbuilding
 
 Realistic worldbuilding is a difficult art: unable to model what someone else would do except by the ["empathic inference"](https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/9fpWoXpNv83BAHJdc/the-comedy-of-behaviorism) of imagining oneself in that position, authors tend to embarrass themselves writing [alleged aliens or AIs that _just happen_ act like humans](https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/Zkzzjg3h7hW5Z36hK/humans-in-funny-suits), or allegedly foreign cultures that _just happen_ to share all of the idiosyncratic taboos of the author's own culture. The manifestations of this can be very subtle, even to authors who know about the trap.
 

diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md
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 first edit pass bookmark: "I got a chance to talk to"
 
-pt. 3 edit tier—
+pt. 3 edit tier (red team edition)—
+—
+
+pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
 ✓ footnote on the bad-faith condition on "My Price for Joining"
 ✓ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
 ✓ quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy
@@ -8,9 +11,10 @@ pt. 3 edit tier—
 ✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
 ✓ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
 - nuance and FTX epilogue
+_ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically
+_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?)
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 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
-_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage
 _ Ruby fight: "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
 _ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one of Euk's animal posts did
 _ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/

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@@ -3365,3 +3365,5 @@ https://archive.ph/6Y2wO
 
 > A trans woman told me, "I get to have all these talkative blowhard traits and no one will punish me for it cuz I'm a girl."
 https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/kq8CZzcPKQtCzbGxg/quinn-s-shortform?commentId=ByARjQ72pNfvzRoLQ
+
+https://www.reddit.com/r/honesttransgender/comments/17tetu5/im_trans_and_i_transitioned_because_seeing_myself/

diff --git a/notes/post_ideas.txt b/notes/post_ideas.txt
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-- Fake Deeply
 - Beyond the Binary
 
 _ Reply to Scott Alexander on Autogenderphilia