From: M. Taylor Saotome-Westlake Date: Fri, 28 Oct 2016 03:12:17 +0000 (-0700) Subject: don't editorialize so much in "Introductions" X-Git-Url: http://534655.efjtl6rk.asia/source?a=commitdiff_plain;h=5a60417fe5277cbce6fc8043ec1f7074ce1f89d4;p=Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git don't editorialize so much in "Introductions" --- diff --git a/content/2016/introductions.md b/content/2016/introductions.md index 3501ed8..7c8a044 100644 --- a/content/2016/introductions.md +++ b/content/2016/introductions.md @@ -6,10 +6,10 @@ Category: fiction "Pleased to meet you," she says. -"Pleased to meet you," I say. "You're very tall," I add awkwardly. +"Pleased to meet you," I say. "You're very tall," I add. "Thanks, I get that a lot," she says. "What's your shirt about?" -I look down at myself, to be reminded to my chagrin that today is the day I chose to wear my new custom "LATE-ONSET GENDER DYSPHORIA IN MALES IS NOT AN INTERSEX CONDITION, YOU LYING BASTARDS" T-shirt. +I look down at myself, to be reminded that today is the day I chose to wear my new custom "LATE-ONSET GENDER DYSPHORIA IN MALES IS NOT AN INTERSEX CONDITION, YOU LYING BASTARDS" T-shirt. "Oh, that's the name of my favorite rock group," I say. "They're from Canada. You probably haven't heard of them."